Monday, October 18, 2010

Microfiction Monday: #53

"Microfiction Monday" is about taking a picture and creating a story about it in 140 characters or fewer. Below the picture is my story.


She didn’t understand.

He’d told her to clean the castle.

But when the king heard she’d swept with his brother, he was furious.


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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 18, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    Cute...sweeping with others just want do,hehe.
    -Jo
    -LazyonLoblolly

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  2. DianeOctober 18, 2010 at 10:06 AM

    LOVE the pun. Super great job!!! :O)

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  3. PatOctober 18, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    I laughed so much at this. She must (or he must) have a speech impediment. Thanks for the laugh!!

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  4. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 11:36 AM

    Wow, that King is tough.
    Maybe it was just a language barrier problem!
    Clever one for sure.

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  5. septembermomOctober 18, 2010 at 11:43 AM

    That was a cute play with words :)

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  6. AnonymousOctober 18, 2010 at 11:55 AM

    Oh my goodness--I LOVE this one! It tickled my funny bone for sure.

    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  7. Templeton's furyOctober 18, 2010 at 12:59 PM

    made me smile :)

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  8. RigelOctober 18, 2010 at 1:56 PM

    A very clever one indeed. I loved this! Haha. :)

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  9. Susan FobesOctober 18, 2010 at 4:15 PM

    This was certainly original-LOL!

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  10. Michael G-GOctober 18, 2010 at 8:45 PM

    Loved your word play! A good reminder that you should be careful whom you sweep with.

    Have a great week.

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  11. hopeOctober 19, 2010 at 3:59 PM

    So even King's need hearing aids, huh? :)

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  12. AnonymousOctober 21, 2010 at 7:55 PM

    Get that king some cotton buds. Geez. Talk about a failure in communication.

    Very funny one!

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