Monday, October 18, 2010

Microfiction Monday: #53

"Microfiction Monday" is about taking a picture and creating a story about it in 140 characters or fewer. Below the picture is my story.


She didn’t understand.

He’d told her to clean the castle.

But when the king heard she’d swept with his brother, he was furious.


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12 comments:

  1. Cute...sweeping with others just want do,hehe.
    -Jo
    -LazyonLoblolly

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  2. LOVE the pun. Super great job!!! :O)

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  3. I laughed so much at this. She must (or he must) have a speech impediment. Thanks for the laugh!!

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  4. Wow, that King is tough.
    Maybe it was just a language barrier problem!
    Clever one for sure.

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  5. That was a cute play with words :)

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  6. Oh my goodness--I LOVE this one! It tickled my funny bone for sure.

    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  7. A very clever one indeed. I loved this! Haha. :)

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  8. Loved your word play! A good reminder that you should be careful whom you sweep with.

    Have a great week.

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  9. So even King's need hearing aids, huh? :)

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  10. Get that king some cotton buds. Geez. Talk about a failure in communication.

    Very funny one!

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