intriguing little write...to cushion the already fallen...you capture a quick moment but i am still processing it...nicely writ...
"in the still-warm footprint" - This like all of your lines really create a picture for the reader. Enjoyed this :)
Wow well done! To cushion the already fallen...brilliant. Fall is here.
Great piece, so much with so little, that truly takes talent, nicely done!
So brief, yet so provocative. You made me want to see the imprint, visualize the scene.
in the still warm footprint - so beautiful..falling in fall is magical...smiles
a deliciously vivid little write. I agree with Kim-- brief but so provocative! Love it. :)
very subtle yet powerful esp the cushion the already fallen line. I like it!
your words amaze me,:)