dark and green as bottle glass
it undulates silently
I scatter stars like breadcrumbs
some stick to the sky like white
bodies on black flypaper
some fall
and I step on them
crack them like snapped branches
some sink in the quiet green
bleed bright tendrils that glow
like little highways connecting fish cities
the moon eats the rest
stars disappearing in its
crescent smile
scattering stars like breadcrumbs...love the surrealism and seems they were to the moon's taste..smiles
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery. I also love the Cheshire Moon... :-)
ReplyDeletenice...i love the natural elements and the scattering of stars like breadcrumbs, some under feet, some in the water and some eaten in the sky...like dreams....smiles.
ReplyDeleteReally bring forth elements from all over in your piece, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThis just kept getting better, right up until that incredible ending. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteLight and dreamlike, but full of vibrant image, with a nice slide to a smiling finish.
ReplyDeleteok for some reason i can not comment on your newest post on color...love that you got your kids involved because they have such amazing imaginations which is evident in these...blue is fast...star clouds...throughout each very nice...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian, I think I fixed the comment problem on the color post!
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